Comments on: Whisper

By: Mark

Mark — Tue, 11 May 2010 22:24:32 +0000

This is the second time I came across this story. The first time I read a few lines adn then skipped it, ghost stories scare the crap out of me. Then I read the whole thing the second time. I don’t regret it. Well maybe a little. But your story was awesome

By: Jonna

Jonna — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 06:14:26 +0000

Bizarre….

By: Edana

Edana — Sat, 09 Jan 2010 21:53:23 +0000

i love it me and my friend just watch the movie
i lve this story is great i would love to read another one

By: Regina

Regina — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 21:45:20 +0000

I almost fell out of my chair laughing at the end! This was such an awesome story! I’m so glad that I read it.

By: Cherie

Cherie — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 08:59:17 +0000

Wow. I really should not have read that before bed.

By: Mike

Mike — Sat, 21 Nov 2009 14:03:36 +0000

Amazing. Just amazing. Loved how you captured the sense of paranoia.

By: c

Wed, 04 Nov 2009 07:29:09 +0000

i dont understand it really :\

By: Autumn

Autumn — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 03:39:18 +0000

This was just wonderful. I love the voice of the narrator. And I can’t seem to decide whether I want the ambiguity to stay just the way it is, or if I’d rather have an explanation — in either case, it doesn’t detract from my enjoyment of the story. I wish I could write horror with anything approaching this degree of competency.

By: Dylan

Dylan — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 07:10:13 +0000

Outstanding! I got a chill when I read the last line! This was an expertly written story.

By: Lydia

Lydia — Thu, 22 Oct 2009 04:54:11 +0000

Awesome. Chilling and inviting at the same time. Sort of a ghostly bisexual theesome that the one warm body doesn’t know about until it is revealed that it is an incubus & his succubus hag having their way with him in his slumber. Brilliant!